Can I Pull This Together?

 I'm using fantasy color in the shadow areas, and changed the color of the dress on the right (which was a very light and bright yellow). Also experimented with the color of the man's shirt, and not successfully— I want him to stand out against the background, not disappear into it. I worry that the orange dress takes too much attention away from the couple dancing, and am not sure about those fantasy color choices.

                                           Dance All Night, work in progress (click on image for larger view)